Monday 6 September 2021

Write from our own experiences

W.A.L.T  write form our own experience.

When I went to the Gondola I suddenly felt a rush excitement! It felt good to back again. We went up to the top of the Gondola and the cafe and played hide and seek together, and then when we were driving back from the Gondola we all went to the playground and for like an hour.

So we played like for '2' or '3' hours at least, it is a fun experience and I recommend you going to the Gondola, cause it is a great family trip all together:) These are my brothers:\







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1 comment:

  1. Miss Pownall6 September 2021 at 10:46

    Wonderful writing Indi! I love how you started your writing saying that you got a 'rush of excitement'.
    Playing for 3 hours is a long time!
    Well done- Miss Pownall

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