friday quick write.

                                               THE GIRL AND THE HOUND

                                                Chapter one                                                                                                                                         Walk time                                                                                          Come on sunny,, said Indi, she was trying to get the dog outside. Come on, Indi lived near the forest. [and near the beach,] she was a lovely girl, and she had two brothers, one was autistic, and the other, well, let´s just say he annoys Indi,, [alot!] Good, girl sunny! Indi was puffed right into her hart. She had lovely golden hair, and she was born in the, United kingdom. INDI! shouted her mum, YOUR BIKE I´S EN´T GOING TO RIDE IT´S SELF! It was true it was´ent going to ride itself. O.K, MUM! shouted Indi back to her mum, ye,! it was her annoying brother, Zeb, Shut up! said Indi she was very annoyed now.   Stop it, it was her mum there to save the day aigain like allways what,? she was the one who said shut up?! said Zeb, I don¨t care! I, my self on the other hand, was at the side of them fighting, I,ll go get my bike then, I said, it was very cold