1.my pet dora thomas is a happy cat, and only has too omotions and they are, 1.happy 2.shy! and she hugs every THING!!! 2.comics my familys pet, shes a happy cat sometimes,. but not all the time,, shes fluffy black and for some raesen,, she HUGS! 3.sunny is the happyest dog on the planet! she chases birds on the beach, she howls when someone is upset, and jumps when shes exitited! 4. charlie the Guinea pig is a very, very, good dad,. hes just a lovely Guinea pig,, but we can never, EVER,, catch him. but he´s still very, lovely! 5. maple is charlias adopted mum, shes just a lovely rabbet. we got her at the,, S.P.C.A and thats were her name came from,. 6.tayler,, a.k.a my brothers fish he´s lucky to still be alive,, cause my older brothers fish ate my fish and not tayler, mabey its because taylers alot fatter! 7. squirel is the best Guinea pig, she had eight babys so far,, all together, I got that name from her couler, her couler is, dark chocalote brown, as light as a sun chocalate, and a little bit of black,. 8. frank is a gentle quiet boy and he´s inlove, with maple and they lick each other,, and they snuggle up together,. 9. steven is my brothers fish, he´s the fat, and greedy one,, he--´s the one who ate all of the other tiny, fish to, humungus fish,. 🌭🍉👅🍕👎🎷🎷,, 10. Goirgy is a fat, funny, greedy, and best of all, CUTE!!! she sniffs, the air for food, 💋💜🌭🍔💎🦊,, she´s pour yellow, ish Golden, and is a,,
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Friday 8 May 2020
about my pets!!!
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ReplyDeleteYou have written a fantastic story about all your pets. I really like all the adjectives (describing words) you have used in your story, it makes it very interesting to read. You and your family have heaps of pets, do you have a favourite pet?
Sarah
Nope, there all my fravate not anyone being missed out, there the best. But wich ones your fravarate?
DeleteMy favourite it you,lovely work Indi May
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